8.06.2008

 

SOMETIMES YOU GOTTA GET IT WRONG FIRST

As a popular show (that, in fact, had been done badly first and then superbly much later on) put it "all of this has happened before and all of this will happen again." (and I'm sorry if you liked the original, but it was largely possessed of teh suck).

Some of my best spec scripts, at least in my subjective opinion, are the direct result of some total crap. My House spec, which has served me well so far, is essentially a rewrite of a House that I basically forced myself though about a year prior. I got to the last page of it, read though it and decided it was total crap. After having written a thing or two...or five...else, I decided I still wanted a House spec in the rotation, and I did a lot of research for that first one, so I started with that crap script and rebroke it from top to bottom. A page-one rewrite. The logline is the same, but little else. The time away let me come back fresh.

My current Dexter spec only found focus after completing a considerably less focused draft and letting my writer's group have at it.

Now, I think it's time to pull some Daisies. I got though a Pushing Daisies draft a few months ago. Even before I was done, I wasn't wild about it. I felt that I was nailing the voices, but the plot felt strained and contrived. The B-plot sucked harder than Cygus X-1. At one point I even gave it to a friend to read and then asked her not to read it. I hope she didn't.

Since then, I've gone though a pilot, aborted on a one-act, but started another and wrote a short radio play. And actually, that Dexter was pulled together after the vomit draft of the Pushing Daisies. And that's really what it was, a vomit draft. Point is, last night I decided that enought time had passed, and started thinking about that Pushing Daisies. My first problem was that the story didn't get going quickly enough. I couldn't quite crack it before, but it totally came to me in minutes this time. I've flushed the B-plot and have some new contenders with a stronger focus on the theme...and I'm reconsidering who dunnit in the whodunnit portion of things.

I feel there will be a strong spec after I tear this down and put it back together again.

So, I say to you...if you feel your script isn't quite working, or you're not happy with your outline but can't seem to crack it...write it anyway. You might find your way while you're in the middle of executing that script, but if you don't you need to vomit that shite out of your system.

Then, and pardon the imagery, file that bile away. Come back to it later. A couple of weeks, maybe a couple of months. It'll look different than you remembered it, and you'll spot the problems easier. And you might find the solutions with a less tainted eye.

4 Comments:

Blogger Emily Blake said...

She didn't. But she's looking forward to reading the next draft.

7:50 AM  
Blogger Avitable said...

I'd love to read your PD spec when you finish it.

10:47 AM  
Blogger Josh said...

On the opposite end of this spectrum... I think the reason so many people get it wrong the first time (present company possibly excluded, I don't know...) is that they don't spend enough time in the planning stages figuring out what their story actually IS being starting to write pages. The lure of dialogue and action and everything being in script format is just too much, and suddenly they have 45 pages of...nothing much.

Just my own stray observations, though...

5:26 PM  
Blogger m said...

Quite right, Josh. Quite right.

There are two schools...the ones that dont spend enough time and the ones that spend too much time.

I'm all about spending too much time, but I don't like being one of those people that hit that wall and keep hitting it and never get into the script because they can't make it work.

Exhaust all the options, then start writing anyway is my philosophy.

When you succumb to the lure and you've got that nothing much, then when you put it away for a while and come back to it with fresher eyes, you find you've got nothing much to work with.

Once I've got my story rebroken, I'm gonna read youse guyses PD for a kinda psyche-up and get back into the PD frame.

5:47 PM  

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